Sunday, May 12, 2013

SHORT STORY 3 - Murder & CES Don Bosco

Who is to blame?

10 am. The reception of the CES Don Bosco was crowded around something. I go carefully and see a bloody cadaver and Maria and Ana explaining to people what happened. I panic and decide to call the police. 


When the police arrive, Ana went to speak with them and five minutes later they leave the university. Ana turns around and said me:
-Isabel, are you stupid? Did not remember that today was the exposition of the Cluedo?
Correct...one again I had forgotten- I thought to myself.

Isabel Lanchares,
Madrid.


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3 comments:

  1. Gloria SanabriasMay 12, 2013 at 5:22 PM

    I've laughed a lot imagine Ana telling you that you forgot again an exposition! The imagery is really strong.

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  2. AnonymousMay 13, 2013 at 10:55 PM

    What a laught! This is very realistic and very possible to happen. =D
    María Cruz.

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  3. UnknownMay 23, 2013 at 2:41 AM

    I completely agree with Gloria. It has a strong imagery. And In my opinion, you have used the defamiliarization technique using the university scenery. Brilliant!

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